Sunday, December 22, 2019
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Kia Ora Kate,
ReplyDeleteWow! I really enjoyed reading about the issue you decided to discuss with Jacinda Arden. I think that it is really interesting that you think devices are being used in schools too much and I think that you make some very good points.
I can tell that you put a lot of thought and research into this blog post.
I noticed that you put your post into a slideshow, what a good idea, I think that having multiple slides helps to keep the reader interested, and makes the reader ask themselves ‘what’s going to happen next?’.
I like how you used a photo at the end of your slideshow, but I was wondering if you could add any more photos into some of the other slides? I think that this would help to make your readers understand your point of view more.
Ngā mihi nui
Charlotte
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